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回复:(風過也心動)Your English is very good.But ...
<p>楼上的,你英语语法没学好,特别是动名词部分:</p><p>Becoming your good friend is my best desire.</p><p>或者 To become your good friend is my best desire.</p><p>另外,也不能说good friend,可以说成是close friend,但是呢,又好象没有男女拍拖关系,你不如直接说成 your girlfriend.</p><p>另外,best desire也不太好(因为没人和你比好坏),可以说成是great desire, 如果非得加一个最的话,你可以说成:my greatest desire.</p><p>另外,不要老用But,中国人的毛病,此处没有转折关系, 可以换成Unfortunately</p><p>还有just用得也不太好.此处可用only. 如果要用only,就不要再用great了.可换成:becoming your girlfriend is my only desire.</p><p>因此:本句话应该说成:Your english is very good, Unfortunately,i am not a beautiful girl. but(此处有转折关系) becoming your girlfriend is my greatest / only desire</p><p></p><p></p> |
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